BEC商務英語初級答疑精選(二)
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Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997,peaked at 25% in 1997,and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996,remained steady in 1996 and 1997,but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997,and then recovered in 1998.
Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997,peaked at 25% in 1997,and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996,remained steady in 1996 and 1997,but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997,and then recovered in 1998.
老師回復:Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to 1998.Sales of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997應該用不同的詞來表述GO UP,peaked at 25% in 1997,and then droped sharply.Sales of sports games droped by 10% in 1996,remained steady in 1996 and 1997,but increased by 5% in 1998.Sales of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997,and then recovered in 1998.
表達很清楚,非常不錯
不足之處是 應該用不同的上升和下降的詞匯表達
一個詞匯用幾遍顯得很羅嗦,建議改正
表達很清楚,非常不錯
不足之處是 應該用不同的上升和下降的詞匯表達
一個詞匯用幾遍顯得很羅嗦,建議改正
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